I rewrote and restructured the entire text for the first time - I hope those who rejected it after the first read will give it another try (and if you see the slightest improvement - please allow me two more chance). Those who could see something in it from the beginning on might now see a first sign of development - Anyways that's what I aim for every day. Yours, Dominic - 18.04.2020 8:58
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